From 48d6807d5476f849fd0d52b5b55fd291c8989e20 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: JeremyRand Date: Sat, 15 Jun 2019 12:40:45 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] README: fix various grammar errors --- README.md | 78 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------- 1 file changed, 39 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 3ac780235..a666356a1 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ PrawnOS -#### A build system for making blobless debian and mainline kernel for the Asus c201 Chromebook +#### A build system for making blobless Debian and mainline kernel for the Asus c201 Chromebook Build Debian filesystem with: * No blobs, anywhere. @@ -14,16 +14,16 @@ Build Debian filesystem with: * Currently PrawnOS supports xfce and lxqt as choices for desktop enviroment. Build a deblobbed mainline kernel with: -* Patches for reliable usb. +* Patches for reliable USB. * Patches to support the custom GPT partition table required to boot. -* Support for Atheros AR9271 and AR7010 WiFi dongles -* Support for CSR8150 bluetooth dongles +* Support for Atheros AR9271 and AR7010 WiFi dongles. +* Support for CSR8150 bluetooth dongles. -Don't want to use one of the two usb ports of for the WIFI dongle? [check out this](#build-the-wifi-dongle-into-the-laptop) +Don't want to use one of the two USB ports of for the WiFi dongle? [check out this](#build-the-wifi-dongle-into-the-laptop) ### Why -Combined with libreboot, an AR9271 or AR7010 wifi dongle, and a libre OS (like Debian with the main repos, the one built by PrawnOS) the asus c201 is a fully libre machine with no blobs, or microcode, or Intel Management Engine. +Combined with Libreboot, an AR9271 or AR7010 WiFi dongle, and a libre OS (like Debian with the main repos, the one built by PrawnOS) the Asus c201 is a fully libre machine with no blobs, or microcode, or Intel Management Engine. ### Image Download @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ If you don't want to or can't build the image, you can find downloads under > wpa.conf wpa_supplicant -i wlan0 -c wpa.conf @@ -164,11 +164,11 @@ Some useful things can be found in `DOCUMENTATION.md` ### Make options, developer tools -(All of these should be ran as root or with sudo to avoid issues) +(All of these should be run as root or with sudo to avoid issues) The makefile automates many processes that make debugging the kernel or the filesystem easier. -TO begin with: +To begin with: -`make kernel_config` cross compiles `make menuconfig` Cross compiling is required for any of the linux kernel make options that edit the kernel config, as the linux kernel build system makes assumptions that change depending on what platform it is targeting. +`make kernel_config` cross compiles `make menuconfig` Cross compiling is required for any of the Linux kernel make options that edit the kernel config, as the Linux kernel build system makes assumptions that change depending on what platform it is targeting. `make kernel` builds just the kernel @@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ TO begin with: `make image` builds the kernel, builds the filesystem if a -BASE image doesn't exist, and combines the two into a new PrawnOS.img using kernel_inject -`make kernel_inject` Injects a newly built kernel into a previously build PrawnOS.img located in the root of the checkout. Usually, this will be a copy of the -BASE image made by make filesystem. Only use this if you already have a built kernel and filesystem -BASE image. +`make kernel_inject` Injects a newly built kernel into a previously built PrawnOS.img located in the root of the checkout. Usually, this will be a copy of the -BASE image made by make filesystem. Only use this if you already have a built kernel and filesystem -BASE image. You can use the environment variable `PRAWNOS_SUITE` to use a Debian suite other than `stretch`. For example, to use Debian Buster, you can build with `sudo PRAWNOS_SUITE=buster make image`. Note that only `stretch` and `buster` have been tested. @@ -186,14 +186,14 @@ You can use the environment variable `PRAWNOS_DEBOOTSTRAP_MIRROR` to use a non-d ### GPU Support -Watch this link for gpu support: +Watch this link for GPU support: https://gitlab.freedesktop.org/panfrost and this one for progress updates: https://rosenzweig.io/blog/gpu-feed.xml -### Build the wifi dongle into the laptop +### Build the WiFi dongle into the laptop -Sick of having a usb dongle on the outside of your machine for wi-fi? Want to be able to use two usb devices at once without a hub? +Sick of having a USB dongle on the outside of your machine for wi-fi? Want to be able to use two USB devices at once without a hub? Check out the instructions here: https://github.com/SolidHal/AsusC201-usb-wifi-from-webcam Warning: decent soldering skills required @@ -203,10 +203,10 @@ The pulse audio mixer will only run if you are logged in as a non-root account. ### Credits and Legal Information -Thanks to dimkr for his great devsus scripts for the chromeos 3.14 kernel, from which PrawnOS took much inspiration +Thanks to dimkr for his great devsus scripts for the Chrome OS 3.14 kernel, from which PrawnOS took much inspiration https://github.com/dimkr/devsus -Because of this started as a fork of devsus-3.14, much of this repos history can be found at https://github.com/SolidHal/devsus/tree/hybrid_debian +Because PrawnOS started as a fork of devsus-3.14, much of this repo's history can be found at https://github.com/SolidHal/devsus/tree/hybrid_debian PrawnOS is free and unencumbered software released under the terms of the GNU General Public License, version 2; see COPYING for the license text. For a list