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doc(self-managed): improve multiregion self-managed readability #4223

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This PR aims to improve readability of the self-managed multi-region documentation by adding tables and refactoring some parts.

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It should not be merged until #4205 is merged.

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@leiicamundi leiicamundi changed the title doc: improve multiregion self-managed readability doc(self-managed): improve multiregion self-managed readability Aug 30, 2024
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👋 🤖 🤔 Hello! Did you make your changes in all the right places?

These files were changed only in docs/. You might want to duplicate these changes in versioned_docs/version-8.5/.

  • docs/self-managed/concepts/multi-region/dual-region.md
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@leiicamundi leiicamundi added component:self-managed Docs and issues related to Camunda Platform 8 Self-Managed 8.6.0-alpha5 September 2024 alpha release labels Aug 30, 2024
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@leiicamundi Let me know when this PR is ready for a TW review 👍

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Langleu commented Sep 9, 2024

@leiicamundi could you rebase the branch, so your change is isolated to what you wanted to restructure.

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@Langleu I'll do it today

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Hey @mesellings, @Langleu, this PR is now rebased onto main and ready to be reviewed :)

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Thanks @leiicamundi I'll do this for you now 👍

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@leiicamundi I have reviewed and made commits directly to the branch for readability, writing standards (for example, we do not use "e.g.", but rather "for example,", and general grammar.

Great work - happy to approve 👍

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Overall, cool suggestion.
Not the biggest fan of the detail column as it doesn't align well on the wording. Also some rows are just repeating the same information or completely out of context.

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Hello @Langleu, thanks for your review. I've modified the identified parts, let me know what you think about the changes.

cc @theburi if you want to do other changes on this doc, feel free to use this PR if you want (I'll not update it anymore today and it will be easier to deal with potential conflicts with #4278)

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thanks for the quick changes 🙇.
Looks good from my side 🚀

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