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DOC-800 Edge how-to using content bundle #1400
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Feedback below. There are ways we can reduce the text and leverage the fact that a guide is a prereq.
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For the Validate section you are in the same spot as you were in the Edge artifacts guide. You can use the same language you used there but you can explain that in order to test, the user must deploy an Edge cluster.
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* Access to a VMware vCenter environment where you will provision VMs as Edge hosts. You will need the server URL, login credentials, and names of the data center, data store, resource pool, folder, cluster, and DHCP-enabled network. | |||
* Access to a VMware vCenter environment where you will provision VMs as Edge hosts. You will need the server URL, login credentials, and names of the data center, data store, resource pool, folder, cluster, and DHCP-enabled network. The VMs you will prepare as Edge hosts using the Edge installer ISO image must be DHCP-enabled. |
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This latest addition, how do I, as a user ensure this is true? Can we link to a VMware guide? You may have to break this out into its own bullet.
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7. Issue the command below to create the **.arg** file with the custom tag. It uses the default values for the remaining variables. You can refer to the existing **.arg.template** file to learn more about the available customizable variables. | ||
7. Issue the command below to create the **.arg** file containing the custom tag. The remaining arguments in the **.arg** file will use the default values. For example, `ubuntu` is the default operating system, `demo` is the default tag, and [ttl.sh](https://ttl.sh/) is the default image registry. Refer to the existing **.arg.template** file in the current directory or the [README](https://github.com/spectrocloud/CanvOS#readme) to learn more about the available customizable arguments. |
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16. Replace the the cluster profile's BYOOS pack manifest with the following custom manifest so that the cluster profile can pull the provider image from the ttl.sh image registry. |
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21. Replace the the cluster profile's BYOOS pack manifest with the following custom manifest so that the cluster profile can pull the provider image from the ttl.sh image registry. |
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* Access to a VMware vCenter environment where you will provision VMs as Edge hosts. You will need the server URL, login credentials, and names of the data center, data store, resource pool, folder, cluster, and DHCP-enabled network. | ||
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* Access to a VMware vCenter environment where you will provision VMs as Edge hosts. You will need the server URL, login credentials, and names of the data center, data store, resource pool, folder, cluster, and DHCP-enabled network. | ||
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@sudkul87 looks great, just some minor suggestions. PR approved 👍🏻
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2. Open a terminal session and navigate to the folder where you have downloaded the palette-edge binary. | ||
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3. Set the executable permissions for the palette-edge binary by issuing the following command. |
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We can combine these two.
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We recommend you check out the end-to-end tutorial [Deploy an Edge Cluster on VMware](/clusters/edge/site-deployment/deploy-cluster) for a detailed walkthrough on deploying an Edge environment using VMware to simulate bare metal hosts. You can use your VMware environment to validate the Edge artifacts and that you have all the required dependencies included in your content bundle. |
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As the next step, we recommend you check out the end-to-end tutorial, [Deploy an Edge Cluster on VMware](/clusters/edge/site-deployment/deploy-cluster). The tutorial provides a detailed walkthrough on deploying an Edge cluster in a VMware environment. |
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This PR adds a How-to for creating Edge artifacts using a content bundle.
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